Comments of chapter undefined of The Forgotten Princess

"i want my woman to be a plump" oh yieeee.. he called her my woman!!. i'm going crazy 😍😍 oh my dear leon.. more dog food please? 😂😂

It’s going too fast! :o They’ve only just “met” for a day and they’re already at the level of teasing each other and pinching cheeks. I’m also not sure about how it should go but wouldn’t it be rude to suddenly kiss the hand of the princess if you’re his personal knight? :o

Oh my, more sweetness author sama. I'm starting to fall in love with this couple :)

He's molding her for the Queen status.

Or he could just accept her as is since he was the one who only cared about her appearance in the first place. She's not a doll. > .> This ML is kinda on the creepy side. Still a sweet chapter though~

😂 Teasing your woman already, what smooth moves!!!

You are too thin. I want my woman to be plum. So come eat and change your body to please me because as you are you are not good enough for my liking. This prince is so disturbing to me. And wrong at many levels

Typos: ...gotten "into" me... (To kinda works but you would usually say "into" for this phrase) And ...that "were" covering... And ...pulled "them" down. And ...straight "through" my... And ...eyes "were" focused... And ...my "hands" out... (It was established earlier as plural "hands" and never said one slipped out since then) And ...when no "one's" around. (Requires an apostrophe for any plural application) And ...on "its" back. (No apostrophe since it is possessive... Otherwise it would expand to: ...on it is back) And "Leon" said. (Says "Leond" atm) And Better be prepared"." I'm a strict tutor. (Previously a run-on sentence... Can use other punctuation to fix if you like) And You're so thin like you etc...??? (I'd recommend redoing this entire sentence. Beginning and the end of it are broken) And ...not so "nicely" about... (Might be worth reworking the sentence structure regardless) And ...see me "as" ugly. And ...say "you're" ugly. And ...felt I "liked" it. or ..."feel" I like it. (Again, the tense debate) And I "sat" on the chair and started to... or ...sit on the chair and "start" to eat. (Another tense debate)

Dis is beautiful and I love it, keep it up

This chapter seems very awkward -a newly appointed knight should not be so bold w/ a princess. Yes, he’s a crowned prince but she doesnt know that.

Isn’t his action weird for a knight?

Ok, we all know who this knight is, and as much as I want to ship them, but isn't it inappropriate for a sworn personal knight to act like this to the princess he served? So much for a disguise, just imagine if the princess was already engaged with another prince and he keeps acting THIS intimate with her

"I want my woman to be a little plump" whoosh there goes my heart

that was a drastic personality change..

i love this story

TheIr are already confortable with each other in such a short time.

The writing is worse than a fifth grader? Did no one edit this?!?

half the jargon is missing. Poorly written!!

You need better proof readers. And if this is historical fiction illegitimate children were never raised in the same palace as the legitimate children. The crown prince would have his own personal guard guarding the princess he had chosen for his wife.

boy you gonna be unveiled if you ain't careful