Comments of chapter undefined of The Divine Wolf... or?

When I read his background story I got goosebumps, the MC is very, very handsome, jobless and bullied, I mean W T F, there´s tons of jobs to handsome people that pay very well and he was bullied just because he is handsome and orphan at the same time. I had a hard time swallowing this background story, you could have just said that he was ugly and the realism would increase several times, he died and became a wolf anyway, who cares if he was handsome or ugly. I liked the idea anyway. Thanks for the chapter.

Your first sentence says, “Some people have it easy in life, and some doesn’t.” What you should say is, “Some people have it easy in life, and some don’t. This is because what you’re saying is that not all people have it easy or that some people do not have it easy. If you were saying that it was not easy for only a single person, you could say that he does not have it easy. However, since you are talking about a group of people, you should us “do” rather than “does”.

Even though English isn't your first language, you have written better than a lot of novels I've read. Most were written by people who only know English.

the writing is very good for your first novel unlike mine

Oh boy, first two chapters, i got curious to see how many there were going to be. By the goddess this book is going to take me weeks i hope i enjoy it!!!!!

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Nice work

being handsome, intelligent and an orphan doesn't mean he can't have a sad backstory, a better explanation would be that he was unfriendly and somewhat cold to others, at the beginning it isn't a problem but in the end it can lead to the others not being overly friendly and even distant with him. he would not get bullied but loneliness is still the outcome and no matter how handsome he his that would not change anything.

So, Fenrir incoming. This one likes this.

great start of the story

Hey guys. This was a great way to start an Isekai wasn't it? If you're interested in the Isekai genre, there is also my book entitled, "New World Archeria". It's really good and I would die for you opinions on it.

English isn't your first language? I wouldn't have known. Even Americans, like myself, think that English is annoyingly difficult and complicated. The only rule that isn't broken is the rule stating that every rule is broken. You're writing a book in English, your second language. That shows how amazingly intelligent you must be. This chapter was perfectly fine with grammar. If I had to critique something, I would tell you that you don't write in the same way that I'd hear someone speak. I'm from the southern US though, so what I hear on a day to day basis is heavily accented and a grammatical horror. I'd have guessed that you just happened to be from a place that spoke like that. This is an amazing story so far, and I'm excited to keep reading. Thank you!

Thx

its so unfair for mc to be so handsome and he died becaus people envy him

So many comments!! 😱😫😓

Thanks for the chapter

This is amazing it drew me in so well

See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

That shift in pov kicked me right out of the story >_> why? it's confusing

Thanks