ArriaCross
The interaction between them is just too wierd. The dialouge. The sudden whole 360° character switch of the ML and the FL throwing away her own promise to keep distance between the brothers. I can't get that a 30-year old buisness tyrant who was apparently responsible for the FL's accident would talk and act the way he currently is torwards her. The ML's character which is supposed to be cold, detached, and intelligent is suddenly acting like a teenage douchebag who reacts impusiv like a cave-man and treats the FL as his possesion. I don't read romance here. There was absolutely no development. The ML went from "I killed her to get her away from my brother" to "you must return my favor of making you reach climax." I love a little action scenes in most romance novels but the author reached the action part a bit too early and roughly. Where is the *******? Where is the ML's struggle to accept his feelings torwards the FL? Where is the FL and her struggle to keep away from men who may seem to hold her down? Where are the sweet sentiments? The denial of feelings? This novel has potentiol but the characters in these novels react too unrealistically. Most Eastern novels are like that but this novel seemed more realistic than most. I had hope for this but the characters are what turned me off; they're old but are acting like middle school students.