Comments of chapter undefined of Dragon Ball - The True Legendary Super Saiyan

Mc really got ****ed over. From reality warping powers to ****ty nen.

with choosing the first one and reincarnating as broly, it was already good, now that you have given him so many powers, it will complicate you, there are many authors that your MCs suffer many types of energy, and in the end they end up abandoning their novel, because they do not know how to fit in harmony all the energies that he gave the MC, they create a great mess themselves.

From reality warping to nen huh? Dropped

Author can you do a small spin off book where mc got all the first abilities and wipes out the gods that tried to lie to MC. That would be fun.

this a verry bad start

To see the protagonist have the chance of all those powers and lose for "stupidity" is frustrating to the reader, I believe it would have been better if he had not shown or spent so much text to explain powers that he would not have. inThe second point I see is, the MC took a lot of powers. He will already reincarnate as Broly, who already has the characteristic of and legendary super saiyan and has picked up another 4 or 5 powers. Dragon Ball is a simpler anime universe, fights are fought by means of punches, kicks and bursts of energy, these skills of it are quite out of place.

Uh not the third eye like tenshinhan u_u

I fucking hate this novel So what do you roll the dice for but don't get anything you **** with me author hope you dive into the river

Damn this author. I look at your author's note and you give me ****? of you think I'll make him invincible from start?? ***** this these types of authors like trolling with us readers damn If the **** God gave words and rules are already sorted why the **** this God can take all those powers away . why our mc didn't fight for it, he is stupid or forced by author..

Bad start

Eh, it really depends on the fic, I've seen many fics with basically God MC's and still be absolutely fantastic.

Is he going to use magnetic force to **** up this God???

AND THEN 999,999,999 YEARS LATER THEY MEET AGAIN

mc is moron useless leaving diamond and taking silver

Oooh. Im liking this fanfic, author-san. Especially the power ans skills. And helo?! Broly?! Who doesnt fucking like him. So powerful!!!

I allready love this fanfic author you did amazing writing the only issue I see is in the end there was not one JOJO ability such a shame

Im dropping

Honestly, it would have been better to just being instantly reincarnated as broly would have been best.

Exp

trash