Comments of chapter undefined of The Legend of Ice

Nice story

Author i havent read your story yet but ur introduction seems to be similar to the name of the wind by patrick rothfuss. Of it isnt u should read his intro it is much much cooler! Maybe make something like = i am of dust and mortal flesh, i tread in the void of the creator and ressurected him from the abyss. Countless trials and tragedies tried me, yet here i am, unbroken, standing before you as the one known as Hasan the lord of ice!

Nice