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Comments of chapter undefined of Persona: Hero x Villain System

Mr_Cuak
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Author after you had read all tell me what you think , like the comments were i explained everything if you had read it or just like this comment. I basically give you a powerfull main if not secondary character, full free lore and possible arcs. Ohh that reminds me , as the mc is getting a sidekick you could also add a sidekick for spiderman like spider boy or something like that. Tell me what do you think about all ( BB , The path , the plan , the weakness , and the sidekick thing)

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Interesting. I’ll take what you said in consideration especially Leech

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Mr_Cuak
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Mc (Possible) Plan : With his tech he could cure his body and appearance ( As shown in Leech original and X-men animated series) and make it like the movie ( Then obviously BB (Leech) could geow some hair) , but how make this happen? Simple and it will explain a lot. Mc can use his blood as it has lazarus pit properties to heal BB (Leech) and as an effect of doing this ( Willingly and conciously) BB could handle better the tech from DC and this will take a weakness out of him. (As even if the Mc gifted him the Beetle , The beetle will ultimately be loyal to the MC and not BB, but now with the Blood of the Mc flowing in BB body it can help to dominate the scarab better and prevent situation from the dc comics) And also you could search a more accurate image to him like be similar to the mc in appearance , like if he were his child. This also brings me to my second point. Doing this you also kill 2 birds with 1 stone. You cure BB of his appearance situation so he will be thankfull , add that to the fact that he will look exactly or similar to the mc( the real appearance , not the jason todd appearence or the others) this will generate that BB will feel like the Mc is his father, the mc seeing this situation could push away leech from the matron from the Murlocks orphanage and train him as well as care for him and treat him like his own son. This will make BB the most trust worthy member at the same level if not above kaecillius. Then you could kill the Matron ( Either make Shield , Hydra, Sword , Sinister or another kill her). This way BB will do whatever it takes to "Please" and "Make" his "Father" proud. As he will be the "Only" parent figure he will have.

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Mr_Cuak
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Mc sidekick ( The murlock) : Blood Scarab

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Mr_Cuak
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Love the chapter , hey i was thinking that maybe he could combine his fragments of fear with his thermokinesis powers ( and could do things similar to real ilusión from katekyo hitman reborn) or do bats of fire or ice. For the kid from the murlocks it would be interesting for him to have the blue beetle ( the scarab war machine)

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Author if next time someone point gun towards him break their hand

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Mr_Cuak
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Now let's focus on Leech or ( As i like to call him) Blood Beetle (BB): Leech can dampen or completely suppress, for an undetermined amount of time, the powers and abilities of any superpowered beings within 50 feet of him. His dampening ability in the beginning was involuntary and uncontrollable, but now his ability appears to be under his conscious control. Leech explained to Johnny Dee he could consciously bring his dampening field in close, so that persons are not dampened unless they touch him. Leech has also been shown to dampen abilities that are non-mutant in origin at times, like the Fantastic Four, Hazmat of the Avengers Academy, and during Marvel's Mutant Massacre crossover event, Leech negated the powers of the superhero team Power Pack, whose abilities were bestowed on them by an extraterrestrial. In X-Men: the Animated Series, Leech was shown to possess telekinesis when he stole fruits from a fruit stand and moved humans that were in his way when trying to escape. When his ability has been targeted at mutants with super strength, at times his victims have become temporarily thin and frail. Leech appears in X-Men: The Last Stand, portrayed by Cameron Bright. This version is named Jimmy, possesses a more human appearance, and later joins the Xavier Institute. Why i explain this? Because i will not take Telekinesis as another of his powers ( I hope the author do the same). Mc ( To gain Leech absolute trust 100%) can cure him ( I will post the Photos of him in the versions)

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Mr_Cuak
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Mc sidekick Murlock Blood Beetle: Jaime Reyes path part 2+: Blue Beetle Armor: The Scarab can create a distinctive suit of armor in response to Jaime's thoughts, or when it deems use of the armor necessary. Once the Scarab dispels the armor, it retracts back into Jaime's body. Superhuman Strength Superhuman Agility Environmental Protection: The armor allows Jaime to survive in a variety of hazardous environments ranging from Earth orbit, to the timestream, to the Bleed. It can survive extreme temperature and pressure. It can survive the heat and impact of atmospheric re-entry without seeming damage, even when the earth around it has been turned to glass. Armor Reconfiguration: The armor can reconfigure itself to create a wide array of tools and weapons, including an energy cannon, a sword and shield, a grappling hook, an energy blaster, claws, wings, and a set of large powered blades attached to the hands, over a foot in length, that can shear through tree trunks.The armor's equipment is mutable to a certain extent, most noticeably in the wings; initially, they were composed of the same solid 'carapace' which comprises the rest of the suit, but later, they began manifesting themselves in the form of a colorless, translucent material. Whether this is because of changes in the suit's capabilities, or because Jaime intended the alteration, has not been made clear. Partial Armor Manifestation: Jaime can manifest parts of the armor - like the energy blaster - without needing to manifest the whole suit. Wing Shields: The armor can create a pair of wings, enabling Jaime to fly and hover. They can also double as shields, should the need arise. Jet Propulsion: When in flight, the armor can manifest a 'jet engine', enabling Jaime to fly at greater speed, at the expense of close maneuverability. Energy Manipulation: The Scarab can shape and manipulate the energy it stores for a variety of effects, including energy blasts, energy cocoons, small-scale solid constructs (shields, chains, etc.), and 3-D holograms. Its energy shields can block a Sinestro Corps ring's blasts. Antagonist Adaptation: The armor can tailor its blasts for use against specific opponents (e.g., Kryptonite radiation against a Kryptonian, suppression blast against a mob). The blasts can penetrate a Green Lantern ring's shield. The armor can call up anti-magic effects against magical opponents. By the Scarab's own estimation, it can even develop countermeasures that can take on the Spectre. Energy Bubble: The armor is able to create a temporary energy bubble around Jaime and/or people nearby. The bubble shields those inside from outside attacks, but prevents them from leaving. A Flash who tries to vibrate through it will find themselves blasted by the bubble. Vibrational Frequency Manipulation: The Scarab can negate the vibrational frequencies of extra-dimensional objects, pulling them into this reality. The area of effect of this latter is unknown; it has been seen to affect objects at least the size of Brother Eye. According to the Reach, this should be impossible. The Scarab can also shift Jaime out of phase with the universe, making him invisible and intangible to anything apart from Reach-tech. Bleed Diving: Jaime can shift into the Bleed, the space that connects the various universes. He can utilize the Bleed's unique properties for various effects, such as instantaneous teleportation, or shifting back in time a few minutes to appear in more than one place simultaneously. At best, he has only enough energy to dive into the Bleed three times in quick succession. Translation: The armor can translate Mother Box communication into a form comprehensible to Jaime. Waste Disposal: While wearing the armor, Jaime finds that he doesn't need to go to the toilet, though he does still need rest.

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Mr_Cuak
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Mc Sidekick Murlock ( Possible paths and abilities): Individual Path : The Scarab has manifested a number of different abilities over the years for its users. Independent: On its own, the Blue Beetle Scarab has been seen to manifest the following abilities: Shadow Demon Defense: When one of the Anti-Monitor's shadow demons attacked Ted Kord during the Crisis on Infinite Earths, the Scarab protected Ted from its killing touch, utterly destroying the creature. Energy Absorption: The Scarab can absorb a blast of energy that would land a human in hospital. Vibrational Frequency Manipulation: The Scarab was able to open the doorway to the Rock of Eternity, which lies outside time and space, for Ted Kord. Independent Animation: The Scarab is able to move by itself for a little distance. It used this ability to attach itself to Jaime Reyes. Flight: The Scarab can fly under its own power. Pincer Blades: The Scarab's pincers can cut through metal.

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Mr_Cuak
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Mc new costume V2:

TyrantTron335
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First

Mr_Cuak
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So weaknesses that Blood Beetle or Red Beetle could have : For this let´s recap : - Green Lanter search and destroy will be gone as there no Green Lantern Here - Truce With Nature: The Scarab will not hurt nature, or the magical creatures thereof (beings who draw their power from the Green, for example), of its own volition. This could be one of his weakness , but i think that with this thing coming from the system it could be overcome or BB could find another method for fighting in case he encounter some magical creature. Reach Tech : There aren´t other scarabs so safe. Magic : This one could be his weakness ( that hurt him but not like kryptonite to superman , more like normal)or BB after awakening ( Getting stronger and achieve with his mutant gene something akin to an awakening that is a new level of his ability , like my hero academia)his mutant ability could negate magic. Magnetic Shielding: Strong magnetic fields block the Scarab's ability to track DNA. Idk about this, but with more tech add , he wouldn´t have this weakness Dispelling The Armor: Dispelling the armor originally caused Bb intense pain. As time has passed, however, Bb would have find the process getting easier. For this i think it will be a good method of training , to train his mutant ability and his tolerance to pain.

Mr_Cuak
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Leech ( The Murlock from chapter 59) Movie version :

Mr_Cuak
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Leech X-men the animated series :

Mr_Cuak
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Leech ( Original , this dimention comics)

Mr_Cuak
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Blood Beetle ( I will call this Mc possible future murlock sidekick partner from now on) Weakness ( I will first explain the beetles weaknesses and then how this apply to BB (or Blood Beetle): Green Lantern Corps: The Scarab sees the Green Lantern Corps as the 'enemy'. In Jaime's first few days as the Beetle, the Scarab did everything in its power to get him away from the Lanterns - up to and including shifting him outside the universe. As Jaime's experience with the Scarab's armor has developed, the Scarab has taken a more aggressive approach against the Lanterns, urging Jaime to kill them. The Green Lantern rings, for their part, fear the Scarab, responding in different ways depending on their wielders (e.g. John Stewart's sparks, as if afraid, while Guy Gardner's induced what can only be described as a 'super-migraine', along with an intense desire to kill the Scarab's bearer). Truce With Nature: The Scarab will not hurt nature, or the magical creatures thereof (beings who draw their power from the Green, for example), of its own volition. Alien Sentience: The Scarab's sentience is distinctly alien; while it won't hurt /nature/, it has shown no such reluctance when it comes to humans, being willing to injure or kill them. Fortunately, Jaime has so far prevented it from killing anyone. Reach Tech: The Scarab's armor can be breached by the weapons of other Scarabs. Equally, however, the Scarab is able to breach other Scarabs' armor. Originally, the Scarab was unable to attack the Reach and their technology. Jaime overrode the Scarab's programming, 'reprogramming' it so that it was able to fight the Reach. Magic: While the Scarab is aware of magic, it doesn't understand it. It's able to perceive, absorb, and disrupt magical energies, but little else. As a result, creatures of magic are often a significant challenge. The Scarab can't analyse certain mystical creatures, and so is unable to develop countermeasures for them. When faced with certain other mystical entities, such as the Spectre, the Scarab panics, offering Jaime ever more powerful weapons to take them on. Magnetic Shielding: Strong magnetic fields block the Scarab's ability to track DNA. Dispelling The Armor: Dispelling the armor originally caused Jaime intense pain. As time has passed, however, Jaime has found the process getting easier.

Mr_Cuak
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Blood Beetle ( I will call this Mc possible future murlock sidekick partner from now on): Over the Evolution path : All previous paths and beyond ( Mc can gift him tech and things for him to become stronger)

Mr_Cuak
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Mc sidekick Murlock Blood Beetle: Jaime Reyes path : Jaime Reyes: The Scarab has displayed the following abilities since its bond to Jaime Reyes. It can opt to use its powers of its own accord, though it typically defers to Jaime. However, if Jaime doesn't want the Scarab to use a power, he can override it. Should Jaime fall prey to a body-controlling power, the Scarab will take control of the armor. Some of the Scarab's powers can function regardless of whether the armor is active or not; others, however, only work when the armor is in use. Those powers that depend on the armor are listed under its heading. According to Jaime, the Scarab has a number of 'options' beyond those listed below, some of which are apparently capable of destroying a city. Artificial Intelligence: Normally, the Reach's command sentience parameters, stored in a Scarab's database, give a Scarab sentience and serve to make it obedient to the Reach. An infusion of magical energies sometime in the distant past altered the Scarab, denying the Reach control. When the Scarab's infiltrator mode was triggered, the Scarab was able to develop its sentience without being in service to the Reach. It also had the opportunity to access the programming of other Scarabs as well. As a result, the Scarab has its own mind, with full access to its own programming. Symbiotic Synaptic Interface: The Scarab's nervous system is bonded to Jaime's, letting the two share their thoughts and emotions. The Scarab communicates with Jaime as a voice in his mind (which sounds like Jaime's mother). No-one else can hear it. Scarab Mindlink: The Scarab can mentally communicate with Scarabs that have not integrated with a host. It can also interface with Scarabs which have created full infiltrators, although this requires Jaime to breach the infiltrator's armor. Tracking Systems: The Scarab can track anything which produces energy, be it biological, technological or mystical. It can track anyone Jaime met since it bonded with him, from at least seventy miles distant. Scarab Sight: The Scarab can scan the people Jaime encounters, informing him of any major physical conditions (such as pregnancy). It can identify and scan metahumans. It can identify people related to those it's already encountered via genetic analysis. The Scarab is able to identify thought-patterns, enabling it to see if something is sentient. It can identify matching energy signatures, letting it see if the energy patterns were developed from the same basis. It can also see extra-dimensional objects. It is continually aware of the electricity in the surrounding environment. It can perceive magic, see how a magical effect can be dispelled, and see through magical concealment. The Scarab's scans can cover at least a five mile square. It communicates the information it gleans to Jaime in a manner he can understand. Temporal Flux Detection: The Scarab can detect changes in the timeline affecting the Blue Beetle legacy; to Jaime, this manifests as intense static. Network Connection: The Scarab can establish a connection to communication systems, enabling Jaime to speak to the person on the other end. Clothing Manifestation: The Scarab can create clothes for Jaime, apparently from recycled waste and skin, which melt when he takes them off. Concealment: The Scarab is capable of concealing itself from 21st century technology (though Skeets, from the 25th century, was able to find it). It can shut off cameras and microphones in its vicinity. The Scarab has blocked a magical attempt to probe it, lashing out at the person who tried. Healing Host Reconfiguration: The Scarab can modify Jaime's body to a certain extent (e.g., offering to give him extra fingers), although just how far the modifications can go is unknown.

Mr_Cuak
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Mc sidekick Murlock Blood Beetle: Ted Kord Path : Ted Kord: Ted Kord was intelligent enough to decode the Scarab's programming, but due to the multiverse energy overload brought on by Booster Gold's interference, and the damage from its exposure to magic, the Scarab was virtually nonfunctional. Its basic abilities were limited to momentary and sporadic fluctuations in its lower level, but otherwise commonly seen, abilities

Mr_Cuak
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Mc sidekick Murlock Blood Beetle: Dan Garrett Path : The Scarab granted Dan Garrett the following abilities whenever he said the Scarab's serial code: Superhuman Strength Flight: Dan was able to fly without the use of wings. Energy Blast: These manifested as lightning bolts which Dan typically shot from his fingers. Temporal Flux Detection: The Scarab could detect changes in the timeline affecting the Blue Beetle legacy; for Dan, this manifested as a feeling of flux in the Beetles' shared power. Costume Creation: The Scarab was able to create a costume of chainmail armor for Dan. It was also able to restore his clothes when he depowered.

Mr_Cuak
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Mc new costume V4: