Comments of chapter undefined of The System of a Vampire

Did I miss the prologue or something?

Hmm so this time he starts off as vampire? Hmmmm well ok? I feel like the first chapter is kinda rushed ? I mean thats just my opinion but no matter what ima still read this

What’s with the first page being signed by me?

Definitely a improvement from the last time i read please dont mess up the power ranks this time also an elf that rules a small village cant be called a king dont rush the plot even now i feel like you rushed the firat chapter calm down a bit explain his background a bit before the start of the story also this kind of plot amor where the old man gives him stuff was definitely not needed im very disappointed on this

I actually have the same name as the person who wrote on the first page

Hmmm

I don't stop reading Draig as Ddraig

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Thanks for chapter

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