Abeehiltz
I really like your book but I did want to point out something constructive. You repeatedly Used the phrase “ didnt know whether to laugh or cry”. in so many chapters. Which wouldn’t be a problem except for how often it is said. It distracts from the reading and takes away from it in my opinion Just makes it seem like you don’t know another way to explain the emotion. Your a very talented writer and I can’t imagine what it is like to do what you do. I have no talent for it. I just hope this note can help in the future.