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Comments of chapter undefined of The Hitting Zone

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Fluffyflirt
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aaaaaahhhhhhh. YOU CAN'T LEAVE THIS AS A CLIFF HANGEEEER! I NEED THEDEETS NOW***! POOR JAKE! POOR JEREMY! NOOOOOOOOO! COME BACK COACH! EXPLAIN YOURSELF!

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cromero
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Top 10 Anime Betrayals

reighn
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This drama is killing me! What a conspiracy! This is much better than korean drama😂 Thank you!

Ply
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dear author, it's too early in the new year to do this to your readers

Cyberpuschel585
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That‘s the worst cliffhanger, how could you do this to us😱 I really need to know how they are!!! Please Jack dont break downđŸ„ș I hope Jeremy can stand this blow How can there be such human trash, i hope he can be burnt but i know that isn‘t right Please one more chapter... or two... i really can‘t stand this

Fluffyflirt
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This entire time Jeremy has been trying to convince Jake to meet his family and this is what has been going on behind his back. Jeremy is going to feel 10 times more guilty than he already does and Noah is but to get on him 10 times more than he already Does. I'm so glad Jake has the Atkins because this is too much. The only reason I can think of for the uncle to pay off the mom is so he can keep her quiet for some underhanded stuff he has done.

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WolfEmperormoon
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@half_empty just when Jake is getting better you twist the knife in!!

Fluffyflirt
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I HAVE NO WORDS. THIS IS AN ACTUAL SLAP TO THE FACE FOR AND FROM JEREMY BECAUSE HE WAS DEFENDING HIS UNCLE, AND HE ACTUALLY PLAYED A PART IN HELPING HIS MOM!

Fluffyflirt
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Coach how am I supposed to sleep now! one more chapter pleeeese

Redeem
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I did not see this coming. Damn this is gonna hit Jeremy hard mentally.

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WhyTee
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phenomenal plot twist. with other authors I'd be afraid the story would go down a path a muddy vengeance and sob story telling, but not with you. looking forward to how this plays out. By the way, since when did you have this in mind? was it planned from the very start when you made your first outline?

CrispyMouse
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Well that was a twist, not sure it is totally unexpected since I've always wondered if he had something to do with his brother's death and I was pretty sure he only took Jeremy because he thought he could make money off of him.

SwordFishOfNoon
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can we vote garret for captain because if we can then: VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!! VOTE FOR GARRET!!

Vastreader
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Aaaaaahhhhhh how could you That mfb and bast If I could get my hands on either one of them I'd cut his off and rip her a new breathing hole poor Jake and Jer to have such ahols for guardians but now they are free from them and so long as they weather this storm the stronger they will be.

andrewww
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I have a theory. Could jake actually be the uncle's son? so basically the uncle had an affair with his brother's wife and they had Jake. This I think would explain why he was paying her to keep quiet especially since he is still paying her after the accident. And for the DNA test since they still have the same mother and Jake's father is Jeremy's uncle them matching as brothers would still make sense.

jfwg
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Nice twist stops us from getting complacent about where the story is going

Zravodka
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nice little change up by coach... thanks for the chapter

Dino_Yuno
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i have been sus of him since the beginning

Ravindra_Sinha_4888
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heck! ! I just want to smack that jack who did so bad to jake!

Mannymangos
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Spain but the s is silent.