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Comments of chapter undefined of The Hitting Zone

odinsonironbeard
odinsonironbeardLv15odinsonironbeard

I'm glad I've decided to pick this book back up after a couple of years

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trytwisted
trytwistedLv5trytwisted

who's the author how the hell has he been able to make me like the characters this much in just 8 chapters.

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RVNGER
RVNGERLv6RVNGER

RAWRGHH......The character feeels and the development of his. You did it nicely and you managed to strike it in the right spot, It has been so long ive been reading this kind of sport novel especially with this quality, You know how hard it is.....Thank you fpr the chapter as always!!!!

Savydao
SavydaoLv11Savydao

author definitely must have a system!. quality content

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CrimsonWulf
CrimsonWulfLv5CrimsonWulf

Dammmnn this novel had great character development bro !

Hahahshhs
HahahshhsLv10Hahahshhs

Since the main character is also the narrator and he is only 13 years old it hits harder when u see him crying, you are doing a great job author

silverfang30
silverfang30Lv15silverfang30

liking the story so far. it has a good pace to it. could work with the dialogue a bit as Noah doesn't sound exactly like Freshman in highschool. its a minor thing.

Ryuusei369
Ryuusei369Lv6Ryuusei369

Author you have a real talent at writing. I don't say this about everyone but you managed to make me feel for your characters within a few chapters. Jake's reactions seems pretty realistic. I really love stories like this.

Aria101
Aria101Lv5Aria101

I just tried reading thus novel out of curiosity.. And woow this novel is really good... Its such a nice break from all the xianxia novels im reading...looking forward for the nxt chapters

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mt805
mt805Lv11mt805

thanks for the chapter

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SomeAsianDude
SomeAsianDudeLv13SomeAsianDude

Good chapter!

Stan1188
Stan1188Lv11Stan1188

😭😭😭👍👍👍👍👍

Blue_Sky_123
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R_I_P_Manohar33
R_I_P_Manohar33Lv12R_I_P_Manohar33

Top tier character development

Bro_is_bored
Bro_is_boredLv4Bro_is_bored

author you got some talent for making people cry 😭😭

011111010101
011111010101Lv4011111010101

I cried on the subway while reading this T-T so good

burntpotato
burntpotatoLv6burntpotato

Thanks for the chapter 💚

KingConner
KingConnerLv15KingConner

Thanks!🧡🖤🧡

DaoistUnKaSF
DaoistUnKaSFLv2DaoistUnKaSF

it's amazingly good! I am on the edge of my chair long for more.

Ravindra_Sinha_4888
Ravindra_Sinha_4888Lv3Ravindra_Sinha_4888

impressive