Reili
To be honest i hate ***** and goody two shoes MC's that just because someone is acting nice he or she goes to extreme lengths to help. And if you give pills wouldn't people be curious where it came from? Make an actual like i dunno Royal guard for the mc. AND dont make them halpless. A bit tired of seeing ***** goody two shoes winging it and no consequences.
I'll stop reading at this chap and probably won't continue unless a rewrite happens. My last rant. His 10 years of progress only amount to this, its as if they prohibited him from leaving the house he's currently residing and exploring the outside. I still have more to say but laziness won me over. You are rushing the plot so much that your're unintentionally ruining your own story. A gem being polished by a coal stained cloth.
So nope he can perfectly show his emotions. Fine fine at least I hoped you give him a juvenile personality and say he got out of his emotionless stump from the love and care of the people aroun him but nope. You just gave him the typical SI insert personality. *sigh* I know I know little things, but the little things are what makes a story great.