Comments of chapter undefined of Get Back to You
Get Back to You
ljack_ace
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I know I’m a few years late to the party but I am enjoying this story. The writing has improved from volume 1 to volume 3 forget about it! However, I have to point out there is a major problem with the tense (past and present) and point of view (1st or 3rd person) which ultimately makes for a somewhat confusing read. Also sometimes it feels like you’re pulling out the thesaurus for no reason it may be your translation program but In English we wouldn’t describe a grade of 100% as a century it’s technically not wrong but is another way to write 100 but it doesn’t sound natural. This is purely for editing help. I’m not hating on the writing grammar has just always been my thing if school wasn’t completely boring I wanted to be a teacher 😂. I’m jelly I wish I was creative or brave enough to tell my own stories. I am excited about Finishing/catching up to real time. I saw you want to get it published and I think that would be amazing! Best wishes
Hello, dear new reader! First of all, thanks for giving this novel a chance. I appreciate it! And yeah, this is my first novel, so I made a lot of grammatical mistakes and also with the whole creative writing. Well, it's a process. I made mistake and I am learning as I keep writing this story. I did realize late about the past and present tenses. I felt so stupid, but it's okay. Because you can always learn! Well, if you would like, you can check out the ebook version. FYI, I just recently published volume 1, so if you had a chance to read it, let me know what you think.
