akikan40
I need to apologize to everyone with the name of the mc's mother, but her name sucks. Couldn't you find something more creative?
Seriously am I the only one who think you exaggerate a little bit about the slow pacing. I know you are known for that but godd*mn speed up a little bit. In this chapter, we have a long *ssMC monologue about him.being shocked of Haruno. The story is amazing (even tho I didn't see anything about it) so good job about that but Shishio character IMO don't match the way you portrayed it. At one point he looks like you're amazing boyfriend and all and another part he looks like a beta. Tho that's my point of view.