akikan40
Mc wants a peaceful life > doesn't want to fight > wants a house and lot which by using his connections and money can easily be done > source of trouble asks him to ruin his peaceful life > mc agrees for a house. Really, mc portrayed as smart is then suddenly stupid. Never learns to say no, 'but he did say "no"' doesn't work here as he said yes in the end. Here we go again as the questionable character development begins very low-key. Chapter summary: BRUH.
I don't get it. Does he want a peaceful life? Why does he search for trouble when he can just avoid it and say no? I know that you make it that so there's a plot but bruh you can just find another way where he benefits him having the traditional Japanese house without getting into a trouble. I understand the story need some actions but if his goal is having a peaceful life with as many as women he wants, why making it in that way. Another remark that I notice is the way your characters are too, how do I say that, too emotional like why everytime there's something one character misunderstood he needs to understand. Then, there's the characters, it feels like they need to know Shishio do or will do like why are you buying this motorcycle? Why are you dating Mashiro? I feel like the MC is trapped and needs to explain everything to them. That's my thought, feel free to criticize.