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@Author I realize you might not see this but who knows? Maybe you will. I just wanted to say thanks for spending your effort into making this amazing story for us. I love the idea and honestly I think you should make a newer version with the same sort of concept. Fix the plot holes that those critics find and make it great! (I’d love to help if you need a proof reader or editor, I’m not great at writing myself)