Comments of chapter undefined of A Path Of Cultivation

So far your writing is way to fast paced, forced info dumps, broken english, broken story structure, no one reacting to a literal angel saying their universe was destroyed and you are know in a new one, Start preaching about random "correct religion" rules about women's clothes and no lgbt lol, for 1 this just makes you the author look like a uncultured loser with ****ed up notions of morality how the world works, 2 why would a fucking godlike angel tell people no lgbt, it's hard pressed for anyone to believe this words coming from this level of an existence.