OmnipotentDad
why make the heavenly sutra force mc like bruh this will just ruin the novel it's nice to add system but it looks like it's just forcing the mc
Err... This novel strayed too much from the title. Moreover too many novel's system included. The First reason, it should be about a father and his child/children. Either fuzzy or funny or anything. The fact, it is not. The Second one, you make it the MC had all-knowing ability cause he was reincarnated being of an apex god from his previous life, knowing cultivation, alchemy, blacksmith, etc. This is nice actually, just you forgot to exploit most of it in the story. Only some cultivation, alchemy, and engraving. Even blacksmithing is just too short. The Third one, you made the apex that MC had in his previous life is just a farce, he was just a frog in a well. That is acceptable too. Fresh story actually. It's all good if it was continued like this. But somehow suddenly you put "System" in this story, moreover Dual Cultivation system that forced the MC to do its willing. Dont know whether this will be temporary or permanent. Why you just not staying at the story that he becomes stronger with his dual dantian and his power link with his children?
This novel is all disarray no clear plot with a mc thatâs dumb,from being a supreme to starting a family to parents being strong,then gods he will be normal to ok Iâll cultivate again to system and characters that show up for one chapter then become nonexistent and useless but yet I still keep reading bec it can be a good novel if put together later so Iâll wait for now