OmnipotentDad
Hey don't focus on those person that criticize your work for so little. Just so you know, I found this novel yesterday, I read it all and gave you all my power stone. Also try not to get influenced with what people want or the quality of the novel might drop , just do what you think is cool. I persnnally liked a lot Mo Xie that seem to not care the slightest about what he's doing, like "if I want I can just kill you all and do the exact same in the next town , so I don't care about you".
I like your story! She is very interesting. It is not easy to write a new story, but they are possible mistakes, not everyone has English native, it can be a second or even a third language. The main thing is clear, what is written is fascinating! Those who scold, try to write a novel yourself, it is not easy, it requires talent, skill, dedication, knowledge. Good luck to the author and look forward to new chapters!
Author is good. Thanks for novel. Its a great novel. From my experience as reader, your writing and idea is great. Hope author not sad. I give author stones and 5 star and hope author will no sad. I love this novel. Keep it up. Dont give up. Great love from reader. Also hope author can get a lot of dough in the future as a writer.