Shaikh_Tohaa
Your fanfic is truly f****d up!!!!! your switching the way it’s going at every single chapter it’s not even something people can read it’s like a book that every chapter a new story!!!!!! This is so f****d up i can’t read or understand it.
increasingly rare, since he started being human again, everything became strange, drama that is unnecessary, appearance of other characters, with only a small background of history, son of thor, now later you will put more nonsense. -I hope you rewrite even before you go into battle and lose your life, because from then on the story became boring and seeing the lack of comments. - I'll just keep seeing where it goes, and if I read that Grayfia is married to another man, I disappear so quickly that they won't even notice it xD.
for those which don't understand. in highschool dxd there are 3 faction. and you can consider takashi dad is one of the god faction. anyway the plot twist is great. we can add more material for the novel by doing this move 🙂 . just like ichigo dad is shinigami. now takashi dad is god hahahahaha it's gonna be fun
I’m never i hateful person but you need to kill your unnecessary inclusion of unnecessary background for the mc with a tofu. ducken rewind it back before he dies, hell he was i will be back for the devil wife he got but it got never mentioned after a chapter, he even knew the time difference is large and did do shit, do he even love her ? And now the teenage drama that was unnecessary just to make him part of the main cast. the duck is wrong with you man you had many options and you go with the most used most cringeworthy shit ever