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Comments of chapter undefined of Bleach Soul Blast

Kagami95
Kagami95Lv12Kagami95

Your fanfic is truly f****d up!!!!! your switching the way it’s going at every single chapter it’s not even something people can read it’s like a book that every chapter a new story!!!!!! This is so f****d up i can’t read or understand it.

yas81
yas81Lv15yas81

😀

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ogre3000
ogre3000Lv5ogre3000

Grayfia after she finds MC:

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

increasingly rare, since he started being human again, everything became strange, drama that is unnecessary, appearance of other characters, with only a small background of history, son of thor, now later you will put more nonsense. -I hope you rewrite even before you go into battle and lose your life, because from then on the story became boring and seeing the lack of comments. - I'll just keep seeing where it goes, and if I read that Grayfia is married to another man, I disappear so quickly that they won't even notice it xD.

Layous
LayousLv6Layous

Thanks for the chapter Please no Grayfia NTR...

KingLeonidas
KingLeonidasLv3KingLeonidas

Nefarious how you throw away so much information, son of thor, really?, And at no time does it give a few small signals like superhuman strength or something appropriate for a demigod ... you have good ideas, but the way you carry them out is too abrupt

An_Anime_Addict
An_Anime_AddictLv13An_Anime_Addict

That was so random wtf!?

Zenos_Maxima2611
Zenos_Maxima2611Lv1Zenos_Maxima2611

maaannn, your forward and backward story line is too close and fast .... this will confuse the reader, please .... not all readers as genius as you can understand the storyline fast forward and backward!

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Evil_Dude
Evil_DudeLv11Evil_Dude

for those which don't understand. in highschool dxd there are 3 faction. and you can consider takashi dad is one of the god faction. anyway the plot twist is great. we can add more material for the novel by doing this move 🙂 . just like ichigo dad is shinigami. now takashi dad is god hahahahaha it's gonna be fun

ruhe
ruheLv5ruhe

I’m never i hateful person but you need to kill your unnecessary inclusion of unnecessary background for the mc with a tofu. ducken rewind it back before he dies, hell he was i will be back for the devil wife he got but it got never mentioned after a chapter, he even knew the time difference is large and did do shit, do he even love her ? And now the teenage drama that was unnecessary just to make him part of the main cast. the duck is wrong with you man you had many options and you go with the most used most cringeworthy shit ever

FcKyOu
FcKyOuLv2FcKyOu

HAA? Grayfia? Wasn't that the one who opened Rossweisse's door? Make me confused the longer this story

DZeref887
DZeref887Lv3DZeref887

I don't understand where this story goes

satihi_01
satihi_01Lv2satihi_01

it's a very stupid storyline, you messed up everything

AEGIR123
AEGIR123Lv4AEGIR123

Harem? Orihime

DA_26
DA_26Lv4DA_26

my brain is confused because the plot of story 😅🙏

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

Thanks for the chapter

Dukesh
DukeshLv3Dukesh

do you get a hard on when you do cliffhanger

Dukesh
DukeshLv3Dukesh

do not worry Grayfia will not hug him but punch him.

Little688
Little688Lv1Little688

Great Chapter!!!

degermon
degermonLv6degermon

Thanks