Comments of chapter undefined of Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]
Greater Than Gods: Chojusen Akimichi [Complete: I'm On The Job Editting~ This Is What I'm Suppose To Write, Right?]
BrightDawn
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Ok buddy while yes it is understandable to keep your memories but you have to understand some people just want to forget menmories because they are too trauma
Seikatsu:Honestly I don’t like this type of mc to begin with but if I look at it another way if he had his memories he could have a clear goal to pursue and enjoy that world to the fullest. If I were to ever be reborn like that keeping my memories is top priority since they are what have shaped me into who I am today. It’s pointless to be reborn if I can even remember my past life.
Mc seems doesnt have knowledge of animes, but its ok for me as long hes op as fck... this is my kind of novel, mc strong from the start. I love to cheat on playing rpg games to be lv99 at start so i dont have to grind, ive spent like 18 years of my life grinding both online rpg games and offline games im too old for that **** and have better things to do
That’s one informative cursing 🤬 session. And I agree to the reason he managed to enter the dimension BUT I doubt Obito has the chakra to keep it open for so long and win the fight with Minato. And his energy manipulation is still just B rank, I don’t think that’s enough to use ANY powers at multiple kilometres distance including teleportation. Sensing what happens at that distance is another matter but it’s strange that he doesn’t have any sensory skills, but if he could sense the village he would definitely sense Minato teleporting around (Obito apparently visited Rin’s grave too). Especially if this is practice for your writing you should work on how to implement ideas whether they are yours or not. Here’s another way to do it: he can sense his surroundings and whenever someone teleports he feels a distortion in the distance (he can only guess how far away it is). And as he would obviously have a sensor skill because of this he should be able to make out the feelings of the person responsible (at least the primary one) and you’ve mentioned he can speak so he would say something about “a scary feeling/chakra” whether the scariness is an act or not, and with the help of his father they will prepare the village for “something” and Minato gets help earlier. (Note. You could try to use Obito’s grave visit too) Try again 😉
