Comments of chapter undefined of One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
Beauty Under the Moon
Chapter comments436
Yeah... author can use these characters to explain Mu's empire, which is given. But, we are looking forward to the character development between SS & Mu & Gu.
Seriously 'No suggestions of him being in a relationship with the opposite ***!?' Then who were all those woman who through themselves on him, what about that time a picture was caught of him and a female actress that Youyou found on the front page of the magazine. What about the 'fiancé ' that he has that everybody knows off. I don't know about you author but being engaged to someone is a type of relationship. Please keep the facts of the book in line, don't say one thing in a chapter and another thing in another chapter. Also the previous chapter made the readers happy because there was at least some action and dialogue with minimal descriptions but then we viewed the next chapter and its full of descriptions, we know they are the Mu family, scary and everything, but keep the descriptions short and sweet.
No offense intended but some of the readers here are always giving negative comments while others are also helpful. Though you may be annoyed by the authors writing please refrain from being overly rude as they are human too and no one would like to hear discouraging words all the time. This is a book and not a movie. I may not be a great writer but I know it takes a lot of time and energy to do good writing which is interesting and creative. If you don't want to be patient with the authors pace please find a book that you like better. As a loyal reader some of us are not in a hurry and appreciate the fact that the author is still updating. Dear author, descriptive writing is really good but as a reader even I sometimes feel like you either use too much of it which may not be so necessary. Also at times there is repetition which I feel would be better if avoided. Please look into this or find a suitable editor who can help you refine your work.
Another chapter with no progress.. Dear Author, please be done with greatness of Mr. Mu and his family empire in a chapter for once and all...we readers have memory & can keep it in our mind...no need of reminding his greatness, character, attitude towards other women again and again... It's very frustrating to read same details over and over again.. I feel that novel has good plot but if it keeps on moving at snail pace then I will have to think of stop continuing with it @Author: please pay attention to our comments.. seems like they are falling on deaf ear
Dear Author & translator are you doing this on purpose .... What is going on why are you makin us wait like this ..... Don't make us loose Interest please..... I really loved the story but it's so slow... Now reading the extra detail which is not much required.... Especially when we wait for hours for your update and find out nothin in the chapter....sorry but... How do you expect us to react... It's dissapointing
