Comments of chapter undefined of One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
Beauty Under the Moon
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My dear author, I really like your story, however just a small suggestion from your fan, don't describe the people or place or situational background too much. Your story has just started, but if you continue your writing style like this, in the next 100 chp maybe, people will get bored and decide to stop reading. So please get to the main story n conversation, rather than describing every single unrelated person in very detail manners. Hope you don't take my suggestion as a harsh critic. Hope that you can take it as a suggestion from your fan who wants your story to grow and more likeable.
Dear translator we do understand the necessity of describing a situation but last few days have gone overboard. Its often repetitive n the last paragraph of each chap gets repeated in the next chapter every time. Plse do edit out the unnecessary sentences. Its an awesome story but we r getting bored.
