Beauty Under the Moon
A request to the author. Please don't consider this as a negative review. I'm just telling this from my point of view. I know that there are many real life incidents which are far more cruel than what the female lead is facing. But don't portray any female character such that all other characters degrade her chastity and self respect. We all know that,even in today's advanced world, women undergo a lot of psychological and physical oppression. But don't write the story with so much cruelty and insensitivity from the other characters towards the female lead. It depresses the readers very much. I know I may drop reading it if I wish to, but I don't want to. Your writing has a potential and we look forward to see brightness ahead in the next chapters. Stories like these should give hope to the women who undergo similar situations. I hope you understand.
Age 4 assembling a computer...please...make the character more human ok. How many children out there are super smart? Just 1 in a million or so. And do not make the heroine a spineless and stupid victim. Life is harsh and we want stories that can make our life on earth happy even though our life sucks.