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Comments of chapter undefined of Dual Cultivation

Tyler_Drake_1532
Tyler_Drake_1532Lv2Tyler_Drake_1532

i like how long the chapters are, and how much detail is put into each scene. As im laying here smoking and reading this i feel like im actually experiencing the story from my own point of view and im watching the scene as im reading it and i get so lost in the words i forget im reading until the chapter ends and reminds me that i am reading. i wish the chapters would go on for an entire day (from the time the protagonist wakes up, to the time they go to sleep). i would like yo write a story like this but with an incredibly high amount of detail to make the readers forget they are reading and just get lost in the world as their own protagonist. Please keep up this excellent writing format in future chapters.

Darkdelusion
DarkdelusionLv6Darkdelusion

When will we see her twin proud peaks jiggle and her buttocks wriggle😏😜

Darkdelusion
DarkdelusionLv6Darkdelusion

She will wet her bed one more time....from a different location😏. Her healed buttocks will also pain one more time

Morvian
MorvianLv6Morvian

will he suck her buttocks?? wahahahaha!~

Yodathink
YodathinkLv4Yodathink

your all pervs my god

MIKMIK
MIKMIKLv5MIKMIK

ignore me.....just here for the 😏😏😏😏

LNG
LNGLv11LNG

Qi blockage in the G-spot!

DaoistJB
DaoistJBLv11DaoistJB

Ahhhh! This cliffhanger is mean! :(

Lordryu
LordryuLv13Lordryu

More more more

Darkoneko
DarkonekoLv5Darkoneko

Su Yang is definitely not puttingnthe sign yp today to making her go see him herself on purpose

DaoOfAutism
DaoOfAutismLv5DaoOfAutism

(◕‿◕✿)Thanks for the chapter(☞゚∀゚)☞

FengTian
FengTianLv4FengTian

This deserves moar chapterzzz

BadKrow
BadKrowLv5BadKrow

Too bad shes still too young for his taste.

Lordryu
LordryuLv13Lordryu

Fuckkkk

Ghost9902
Ghost9902Lv5Ghost9902

Thanks for the chapter.

gemechisa_teshome
gemechisa_teshomeLv1gemechisa_teshome

sweet a girlfriend

OBsErVEr_0897
OBsErVEr_0897Lv4OBsErVEr_0897

Thanks for the chapters

VanshRaj
VanshRajLv4VanshRaj

thanks for the chapter

Southmonk
SouthmonkLv15Southmonk

Interesting book. Please write more!

ExaltedBlank
ExaltedBlankLv6ExaltedBlank

Oh boi she needs it

LamphierStreet
LamphierStreetLv5LamphierStreet

More pls