Einlion
Thank you for the chapters, great "slice of life" style story telling and overall a great read. My two "criticisms" would be you need to work on your action parts a bit to add excitement and your story is starting to bog down a bit. We're all waiting for the big reveal and what our MC can do and all the cans of worms it will open up and that alone could run into a 100 chapters at least. It just lately that the chapters are getting a bit frothy and less content. Please don't take this as a slam because for the most part it's a good story it's just you're starting to DBZ the story and I just wish you would move it a long a bit.