Einlion
Dude ... Is it my impression or is Vahn's strength stagnant? If you go to get the beginning gives history and a little more forward, he fighting, defeating and surpassing his limits with each monster always showed an increase of agility strength and etc ... Now, even though he had this intense training, even if only to teach him to fight correctly, he should give him more strength in his strength ... It is as if he had stopped growing stronger. That's the impression he's been passing me ... Well, man, with everything Vahn has spent in his struggles and healing Lili and the other girl ... That should have given him at least his endurance and muscles growing to alarming levels ! In these two situations in which he healed these girls, he took his body to a certain limit, which should have benefited him with epe getting stronger. I just do not understand exactly why he is not growing in power at the same speed as at the beginning of the story ... Actually, one can say that his growth is totally stopped! I do not know if that can be it, but author, have you focused so much on the character's personality development that it has stagnated your power growth without even realizing it? Dude, he should already have a Level 3 Adventurer's strength ... Well, for me what Tsubaki is teaching you is the correct way to fight and polish your fighting style ... Because, if it were in the development of your strength ... He would have long been at higher levels than now... I really am wondering why he is not getting stronger like the first few chapters of the story ... Even though the growth he was having a little faster than normal, this would justify the fact that he had a special body and also because he had the system ... In my view, it would not hurt the story, because eventually he will have more challenges in which his strength will prove insufficient, and he is currently only growing in personality and sentimentality ... (Not that he thinks this is bad ... I'm enjoying seeing him becoming more "Human" with interactions with other people ...) But he's frustrating me training, training, and this only gives him nothing more than a more advanced battle perspective ... He must be building up gradually with these interactions. This chapter proves this, even these two girls being strong, he lost miserably. Even with all this training you're having with Tsubaki. Well, I got it out of my head ... It was already killing me. Thanks for the chapter!
Not a huge fan of this chapter just because off how the MC fights. It reads as if he is tunnel visioning in the first fight and in the second he's just charging and swinging like a monkey with a stick. It reads as if he isn't thinking at all either. Now, he's gone through all that training to actually stop tunnel visioning. How it's described is that oppo 1 is weaker than teacher, but somehow she is able to outdo the teacher. he concentrates on a one and a hand appears out of nowhere? Why use the domain if he doesn't notice anything. He's trained against faints as well but still ignores his training. Against ais it's just reads as if he's picked up a sword for the first time as well as ignoring his training. Then he concludes that he's trained enough? He's flailing like a retard and relying completely on his attributes forgetting any training he's done. Does his swordmanship skill activate at any point because overhead swings and wild lunges to the legs, putting all weight into a swing just scream of no training at all. This chapter pisses me off so much because the rest so far is well written and fights seem to fit into what we know his capabilities and training are. Swinging like an idiot who's never picked up a sword when he first enters the dungeon? Complete fine, he's an idiot who's never picked up a sword before and happens to have a magical sword where wild swings help more than hinder. 3 months of top class training later and he shouldn't be acting like that. Argh, didn't want to rant this much but this chapter just... argh!
How embarrassing... Weak ass boy Vahn got **** on by 2 low level chicks. My homie needs to go into seclusion or something. It's discouraging watching him get tossed around like an average ass nigga His skills are wack. His strength is wack. His equipment is wack. His training is wack. Them other adventurers is Tight AF
Yep totally dislike this chapter. It's just stupid repetition and hurts the story more. He knows already that he is weak and it was shown with the spars against tsubaki. These fights just let him look extremely weak. And yeah I know they are a higher level, but I would have liked if the spars were at a later date. Now it just feels miserable to read...