Comments of chapter undefined of Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Einlion
Chapter comments93
When will this segment focusing on lilly end because I honestly hate her she's such a leach and is in constant cock block mode. Just her whole personality is just horrible I mean I get that she's an abused child and all but just I don't know make her more of a back ground character like the odd mention in a sentence hear or there that he trained her because her existence is slowing down the mcs development by miles he reached the 7th floor before but now he's playing training guide after being a adventure for a week it makes me wonder who's indebted to who.š”
Reading through this story i feel like the actual plot has come to a halt, i understand you wanted to focus on side characters and let them develop, but it's been so much at this point, i mean we've been going like 10 chapters of pure side character focus. It's hard to balance things out, i know it's your story and you can write what you want and however you want, but it's also important to not get lost in the story of the surrounding cast essentially stopping the progression of the main story. I'm gonna keep reading praying this isn't gonna be a recurring theme in the story, i doubt it will be, but you can never be too sure. All in all though you're a very talented writer :D
This is getting Boring With the Loli Thing, Is this Mainly Based on Romance Story not on Adventure of Getting Strong and Knowing the Vast World? The First Chapters we're Very Satisfying. But from 40~ the Novel Started to get Retarded. I will Keep Reading for now a Little More. If It Continue Like this. I will Quit. JUST LIKE MANY DID!
This is getting Boring With the Loli Thing, Is this Mainly Based on Romance Story not on Adventure of Getting Strong and Knowing the Vast World? The First Chapters we're Very Satisfying. But from 40~ the Novel Started to get Retarded. I will Keep Reading for now a Little More. If It Continue Like this. I will Quit. JUST LIKE MANY DID!
it is a shame to watch what you're doing to your story, it has been going downhill ever since you introduced lily. honestly i miss the first couple of chapters before he went to the city. I was hoping to see things progress after he join the familia, but it's even worse. does every single one of his friends have to love him? hope things get better, i really liked your writing style and the initial "plot". i guess the loli part does influence my opinion, since i really dislike it...
