Comments of chapter undefined of The Achievement Junkie
The Achievement Junkie
TheSilverQuill
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First, I want to say I truly did loBe and admire this story. The writing was fabulos and enticing Drawing me in and Keeping me hooked. However, I want to say mu one problem about this book because it makes me nervous to truly comit and your other books. This is halmUtt and kylon child. This affected me because one for jack later on would be him trusting durann to protect his wifes while he grows stronger, but that example already proves he wont as long as it means he is in danger affecting that whole dynamic. you kinda glossed over it and did not mention it in thIs novel, but I feel like this was one thing you took to far in a sense when just messing with her mind about her hating skyran would have been enough and Durann can see he knew if thEy lost it wouldnt matter cause they would all Die or she would healed and fine. With the child it Changes how the characters view that and since this is a series you will have to ignore it and just pretend it Did not happen or acknoldGe it and do what you want with it. This is your book and your world so it is all up to you but I am wondering how you will deal with This i The future. End note it was an amazing book and I hope the series is just as Good
Congratulations on completing AJ! It feels surreal now that it's over and I'm glad to have witnessed it's creation. Thank you for sharing your stories with us! I look forward to DBA and meeting all the diverse main characters of subsequent works down the line. So far we've had game summoning and truck-kun. Gotta wonder what else is in store for the (un)fortunate MC's :D A final thank you for the chapters and best of luck in your continued endeavours! :)
Aaah and there's the The End line... Not gonna lie, I would love to read more of AJ but I suppose that was the perfect way to end a novel in a series hahaha It makes me want to read the other books! Thank you for the amazing journey this novel took me through! Also, I took the liberty of starting DBA early and I'm looking forward to the updates soon! ❤️❤️❤️
Its been an honor reading your works Quill. :) And something else that this book has that I haven’t seen in other books is that the readers are like our own little community and the only reason we have this is because of you Quill and on behalf of everyone id like to thank you for connecting to each of your readers it has made this a special experience that I haven’t had with any other author
ok, I just binge read your book and I'm lost on a bit of info. when did skaryn get released from his seal? I saw how it went back as a flashback once or twice after the talk with the auntie, but I'm lost on when it happened, and how they switched the second body of jack with him. side note, I liked the story and I'm about to binge read your second book and then your third lol
