TheSilverQuill
You know I love your works and all and considering this is my second time reading this book says something. But considering everything Jake just has been through wouldnt it be normal for him to eventually snap? Like jesus the guy is having women thrown at him left and right especially by their families. As any normal and sane person they get fed up and snap. Dude doesnt want this and I understand on how everything goes but he could have bluntly threatened to kill the dudes daughter as soon as he had a chance to stop him from forcing the marriage. plain and simple ya she may be a little stronger right now but what about a month from then? he definitely be stronger and could easily kill her for allowing her father to do that and basically making her own father's plan backfire along with him failing to protect his daughter because he forced her to marry someone that didnt want to marry her. Plain thinking in my opinion. Real stupid how this events played out along with how you added her to the harem. Could have easily avoided the conflict by not even trying. To be honest in that world and society ya Jack is unique but where he came from he break eventually under the pressure and probably lose his cool this would have been a good showcase of pushing a supposed hero to far and it doesnt matter the level difference because at that point the feud between either the adventures association and the auction house would become irreversible due to how things play out. Especially if he could contact the guy who traveld with Jack boom issue solved plain and simple. But nope bad writing for this chapter in my opinion. Overall love the book but these events could have been played out 1000× better if more thought was put into it.
Man, I love your story but please don't just throw girls to him like vegetables. Maura is alright but then came Keela and now a new girl, atleast give them good characters and not spoon feed them smh. Also,why does he have to keep on spilling secrets? I thought he's get smarter but he's just displaying his identity left and right. Please fix that author. I love tye story but these stuffs makes me cringe inside. Thanks.