TheSilverQuill
The only things I'm having issues with while reading this is that I'm personally not really a fan of the "Goblins are randomly the good guys" theme, just feels cartoony, and if they are sometimes good guys then why on earth are they not paying taxes and such yet setting up kingdoms within kingdoms..?! Makes absolutely no sense at all. NO government would stand for that, there would be war until either side was subjugated by the other. Also what do levels do? Apparently not a lot. Other than that, fantastic story so far, really enjoying it.