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Comments of chapter undefined of Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world

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hadezs7
hadezs7Lv11hadezs7

Thank you so much for your hard work! it was a sad and fitting end for the last chapter of volume one I feel amd look forward to the next part and the contuatiom of the shadow story!

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zales
zalesLv14zales

one great story can't wait for the next one

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Dragonskruhei
DragonskruheiLv3Dragonskruhei

this was an amazing story... it brings a whole new perspective to the term "machines of war" and i am so glad that i have had the chance to read this. thank you gamma

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thechummygremlin
thechummygremlinLv15thechummygremlin

2nd time reading it. still a good read

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DeDKebine
DeDKebineLv4DeDKebine

Tbh this was the first story I've ever read on this site and it was one of the best! Continue doing good work on your writing Gamma 👌 I'll be waiting for the next one😉🔥

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EightLivesNow
EightLivesNowLv12EightLivesNow

Well. That was a helluva ride.

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heli
heliLv15heli

i was annoyed by the ending he coukd have just forseen, he said he has done a lot of cleaning and he still allowed those he loved to celebrate IN THE CAPITAL.. please... i guess is more of a machine than a sentient being if he can not even hypothesizewhat happens to people who grow too powerful both individually and a group and start disobeying the group of body they work for.

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Astartes_Alchemist
Astartes_AlchemistLv15Astartes_Alchemist

Dax always took pride in the fact he was so lethal and efficient as a soldier. Now he is only a weapon to be deployed. The greatest sacrifice he could make to save those he cares about. That ending actually upset me. Not in a bad way. I thought it was a very solid ending and was also apparent if you paid attention to small details. It upset me because Dax is this unstoppable juggernaut of death. Yet he only has one weakness. That's what caused him to fall.

ShatterTheHeavens
ShatterTheHeavensLv5ShatterTheHeavens

Man never knew it’s been six months... Still waiting for S2..

snow_leapard11360
snow_leapard11360Lv13snow_leapard11360

I have a big question to ask...will you even make something like the gate not like How PWO FALCON does it but like Hack does it kinda...you know like 25th century meets medieval like that book Eodem: the rifle and sword adventure?