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The CEO's cute girlfriend is a werewolf

Ajrini

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mavsynchroidLv12mavsynchroid

You need to proofread your chapters better or get an editor. I’m not sure if English is your first language or not, but a lot of sentences are poorly written or just flat out wrong.

2yr

kinagamiLv15kinagami

Paragraphs need to be broken up better. All I see is a huge blocks of text.

5yr

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elifalarteyLv4elifalartey

Nice start.keep up the good work

5yr

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greeeenLv7greeeen

Sounds like a wild party; five straight guys with a dozen hot Finnish transvestite guys.

5yr

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Ladyluckmia2018Lv12Ladyluckmia2018

I feel that this chapter is all.babbling. the storyline is chaotic, sentences is grammatically muddling some sentences are an eye sore. I hope the author will proofread it. I still would like to read the next chapters since the review synopsis is good after the first chapter. Will.wait and see first if it is up to par with other novels.

5yr

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