Poetri_cantique
The stoty is good but...am I the only one that think the author is so rush on the sentences...its feels like we are on racing ...or roller coaster.
yup sometimes
Editor, where are you? We need you~
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Rushy and gap...good story
too slow
Pls get this writer an editor and writer pls stop rushing the story I cant properly understand it with the way ur writing its quite weird
Y do they always have sex it’s like there relationship is only there cos of sex
good story...but soo little dialogue on the character ... the author just like to tell their story in rush
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Thanks
Story is good..... Grammar needs to be improved !
Great story. But i think the author is in a hurry
Nice
Amazing story
😘
Sweet punishment
I feel like my head just got off from a rollercoaster ride every time I finished reading a chapter. But I just enjoy the ride because the story is quite interesting. 🤕☺