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Comments of chapter undefined of Trapped with Tycoon

liuliubaby
liuliubabyLv5liuliubaby

The stoty is good but...am I the only one that think the author is so rush on the sentences...its feels like we are on racing ...or roller coaster.

pinky12_
pinky12_Lv6pinky12_

yup sometimes

_eunwa
_eunwaLv4_eunwa

Editor, where are you? We need you~

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DinoMama
DinoMamaLv11DinoMama

Rushy and gap...good story

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pinky12_
pinky12_Lv6pinky12_

too slow

obovu_oghenerume
obovu_oghenerumeLv1obovu_oghenerume

Pls get this writer an editor and writer pls stop rushing the story I cant properly understand it with the way ur writing its quite weird

sabia204
sabia204Lv5sabia204

Y do they always have sex it’s like there relationship is only there cos of sex

berarapa
berarapaLv14berarapa

good story...but soo little dialogue on the character ... the author just like to tell their story in rush

Onuka_Valentine_8998
Onuka_Valentine_8998Lv10Onuka_Valentine_8998

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

RRRaka22
RRRaka22Lv5RRRaka22

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KRC
KRCLv4KRC

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

gen143
gen143Lv5gen143

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

Kylakawai
KylakawaiLv12Kylakawai

Thanks

CTN
CTNLv14CTN

Story is good..... Grammar needs to be improved !

pampam20
pampam20Lv10pampam20

Great story. But i think the author is in a hurry

True2You
True2YouLv14True2You

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

rinoa_ashley21
rinoa_ashley21Lv3rinoa_ashley21

Nice

Doherty
DohertyLv4Doherty

Amazing story

amoilin12
amoilin12Lv4amoilin12

😘

Aniiiiiii
AniiiiiiiLv4Aniiiiiii

Sweet punishment

Remzki25
Remzki25Lv5Remzki25

I feel like my head just got off from a rollercoaster ride every time I finished reading a chapter. But I just enjoy the ride because the story is quite interesting. 🤕☺