Comments of chapter undefined of Trapped with Tycoon

This story has a good plot but terrible grammar that makes it difficult to grasp better.Pls change the tense to improve the story.

Is it only me or is the story really fast and prod line and such

Please work on your English this is very hard to follow

Man the story line is good but I feel like you are in a rush and kind of a short note, not even a summary.. and the terrible grammar is literally making it lifeless.... plz get some other translator for God's sake

This is a GREAT story but you seriously need an editor til this day. The grammar and editing altogether. This could be in the top 10 if you had more help.

I'm enjoying your work, dear author, but can you please improve on the grammar, and spellings thanks

Good story but the english needs improvement

The construction of your sentences are quite not good. If you always uses the names of the characters it will only sound ridandant or cliche

Do not listen to the haters. I love your work and it’s ok to have mistakes. Just know that you will get better at writing in time.

A daydreamer, Shuei Lan!

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love the story author! sometimes too fast but still can' enjoy it. tq 🥰

Please fix grammar 😬

story line is good

She is for a big suprise 😂😂😂

Aye mama mia 😩 my head and even my eyes hurts but i can't stop reading.

Love it

🤔🤔

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