Comments of chapter undefined of Trapped with Tycoon

Is she that stupid? After getting drugged and ending up in bed with him she still had the guts to get drunk even without the situation being clarified??

Thanks for the story but I really have to stop here. The grammar is really giving me headache... Nice story

Dont worry about that grammar comments no one is perfect, just keep doing what ur doing, I'm liking this story.

I think you have an interesting story right here, however the translation or the grammar can cause too much headache.. i think I really need to end here.

Author sama, your novel is good so far but the only problem is your paragraph. Please use SHE, HE, HER, HIS, HIM and used another nickname for BEN . I mean if he is JUNs 'assistant' then use his position and not mention his name in every sentence . Don't always use their names . (Sorry for my grammar 🤣🤣🤣)

I have also start reading your book but the grammar problem caused me headache, well not insulting you but i know you can do better 😊 From the plot to the story its perfect

The plot of the story is good..its just that it really needs to be edited/proofread..

Just keep going with did romantic scenes and I will be all high heavens oh I wish I have a boyfriend

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I like the story as well but im so confused with the names, good job dearest author but please try to make some space in every sequence..👍👍👍

you should pace your story a bit, everything seems so rushed and when things happen it’s just a paragraph. i still have no idea what Ben even does and what happened in that bedroom?? what was the revenge thing jun did? it was handled poorly.

The storyline is to fast.... All is tell in a time... Slow down please... Tell more detail to give feeling in your story

patient in action

I'm liking the story more now 😊

hmm... interesting story...🤔🤔 i think.. i like it..

hmmm interesting story..🤔🤔😊😊

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

It would be better if the story takes a slow pace.......cos the story feels LAME

what a day