Poetri_cantique
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This is a good start
Ok I thought it was only a little bit but the grammar is seriously bad I can't even understand what I am reading but the story is good
Am.a.little confused here...if bella is the real girlfriend why is it that this older sister has the upper hand?
love the story
love it
The flow of the story would have been better if grammatical mistakes were not commited.
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This story is pretty good. Please write another chapter. Good luck
nice
Author, just started reading and I like what am reading and imagine.....keep itđđđ
lovely
Grammer but good đđž
Curious if the flow of the story gets better
Plz plz plz plz plz next chapter
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