Comments of chapter undefined of Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top

Ill be honest i think you should drop the mad scientist or experimented ideas unless its a preview of a movie or something jay was watching cause i honestly that will make the story harder to build keeping the realism and it doesnt coincide with the title im criticizing cause i have read a lot of orignal novels before and this kind of jump and addition of weird things in a realistic story puts most reader off i hope you take my suggestion to mind author dear but the last part of the chapter was a put off for me

I really want to see everyone reaction to Jay kiss in the movie

This last part having something to do with the reason jay got reincarnated and obtaining his system doesn't really match up with what was written in the first 1 or 2 chapters, though? Wasn't it said that "the gods took pity in him for being the first person in 10,000 years to die of heartache"? I think it'll be more like Jay getting caught up in that mad scientists mess. Thanks for the chapter, Elawn and have a nice break!

Wow, an actual reason for reincarnation and system~amazing.(๑•̀ᄇ•́)و ✧ But not as much as the fact that Jay got a kiss from Em, Leah, and lou together😢.

Maybe author got married along with sister.

Honestly this would be so disappointing if it ends up being dropped. I really thought that I had found an actually good story that wasn’t full of cliche stuff. Let us pray to the lords above for a very rewarding Halloween tomorrow from the author.

just tell us if you're dropping this that all we need

The time has come boys and girls it saddens me greatly but we must accept that, Jay Aslan has fallen to the infinite hiatus.

😔 another week with no word. I don't even mind that it's been dropped, just wish the author would quit ghosting her fans. if it's writer's block, just say so. If you lost interest in the story, just say so.

Wow, this came out of nowhere. I would rather have no real explanation for the system, and have his struggle to become famous be the driving force behind the story.

Great chapter as always Elawn, thanks! Be sure to enjoy your break. I just hope this system intrigue plot doesn't overshadow the slice of life stuff I've been really enjoying all this time

WHY ARE YOU PEOPLE STILL GIVING POWER STONES FOR A NOVEL THAT THE AUTHOR ABANDONED?!?! The author is sitting back home laughing at you idiots who think she will come back, yes I'm one of those idiots who keeps checking back hoping she would write again

is the author alright, its been five days, hope author is alright, something mustve happened irl

pray that Elawn is stocking chapters for a mass release surprise on her comeback.

thanks you friend I am a muslim, so thank you for not discriminate about religion i read a lot of story. and when they speak about islam they show it as the most evil thing without knowing anything thanks you for your cherching and not changing anything about it thank you verymuch my respecte and a great story .we are waiting your friend from the other side of the world(morocco)

The Author and I clearly have a different meaning of soon

......... author you are really disappointing me. Just tell us your dropping this already so we all can move on with our lives instead of wasting time each day trying to see if you updated or responded to a comment

Whenever I’m bored I just come here to read the comments 😂😂😂😂

"Update 10/18/2018: First of all, I apologize. I am NOT dropping this novel, but my sister's wedding preparations (god I hate weddings) are taking their toll on me and my daily life so I haven't been able to write as much as I'd hoped. I initially thought I'd be able to start posting after a week of rest but that was a serious mistake on my part. Now, I'll definitely be back soon, so fear not! Also the new volume will be named "Red Carpet"." Current date: 11/21/18 "NOT dropping this novel" they said. "definitely be back soon" they said

Jay Aslan journey to the bottom after three weeks...😑