Comments of chapter undefined of Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top

Lou uses tackle. *critical hit -9999999 heart damage* Jay enters coma again due to diabetes.😔😍

So November 6th is an international holiday now right? 'LouDay' or 'The Day of Lou' or 'Lou appreciation day'

Lol. I’ll just name my forever puppy after the first thing i see! Reverse psychology 😂. The first thing I’m seeing right now... My phone ... I’ll name mah puppy iPhone 6.. Jk

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I wad expecting this chapter to be 'lou's birthday'.. Many many happy returns of the day lou!!!! Btw.. Author sama.. Did you forget about his grandparents and aunt??? Uh... I can't believe you are keeping them away from Lou!!!!

"Puppy!" she gasped. That got the attention of the others. I can Imagine all the "others" just whipping their heads in her direction with wide eyes "WHAT!" "WHAT!" hahahaha

Is Cover Jay More tanned? i prefer the previous one, this one looks like those fake Cheetos California tans

It's annoying the part of the "doting brother who don't want boys near Lou".

If he makes Minecraft Gameplays on YouTube I swear someone will catch these hands

Man this sweetness will melt you over 9000!!

Welp, time to put all my power stones into the book.

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Let me be the first reader to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY LOU!! You guys should greet too!!

I would like to post some song suggestions one more time, this will be the last time so as to not seem forceful and annoying. I would like to suggest Jolene( slowed down to 33rpm ), Guided into Serenity ( Signs of the Swarm ), Metal Will Never Die ( James Dio ), Murmaider and Face Fisted ( Dethklok ), Cesspool of Ignorance ( Signs of the Swarm ), Scarborough Fair ( Simon and Garfunkle ), Black Sheep ( Metric ), Garbage Truck ( Sex Bob-Omb ), Turn the Page ( Bob Seger ), Lovely ( Billie Eilish & Khalid ), Malaguena ( Liona Boyd ), Mr. Crowley ( Ozzy Osbourne ), Somebody Told Me ( The Killers ), Gone Away and You're Gonna Go Far Kid ( The Offspring ), Gown ( Head Honcho ), Through the Fire and the Flames ( Dragonforce ), The Forsaken Effigy ( Shadow of Intent ), Sunny Afternoon and A Well Respected Man ( The Kinks ), Rasputin and Sunny ( Boney M. ), and Mine ( Bazzi ). I have many more but I figure this is already to many, good luck and I love your story.

Alo

Puppy~

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter :D

Meep