Comments of chapter undefined of Sovereign of the Karmic System

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whenever i started for a novel to read always find that some reader that eagerly want to change fighting style or the weapon that used by mc. Idk is it critics or something else but dude if u want to decide what mc gonna to do then make ur self ur own novel and be like author tho

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Just put the chapter through Word’s spell check. Love how the story is going so far though!

TYPO: "daniel" -> "Daniel". You also need to learn to capitalize 'I's in sentences

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oho that's the guy you offended in the auction house 🏠🏡🏠🏡 men

Thanks

Thanks for the cap

If complete and utter chaos was lightning, then he'd be the sort to stand on a hilltop in a thunderstorm wearing wet copper armour and shouting 'All gods are bastards! Terry Pratchett, The Color of Magic (Discworld, #1; Rincewind, #1)

Gotta be honest, it feels weird that with this system the karma of the people he meets (or at least the color of the numbers) isn't mentioned whenever they are first described.

We cannot understand without wanting to understand, that is, without wanting to let something be said...Understanding does not occur when we try to intercept what someone wants to say to us by claiming we already know it. -Hans-Georg Gadamer

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