I had this in my library but I hadnât even started to read it just to get the notification today that itâs getting rewritten. I donât know if thatâs a good thing or not.
No Harem pls there is no character development and if you're serious about your novel then you should drop that.
Even though I am saying that in the end, it is your novel and your opinion.
This is only criticism and shouldn't be taken personally.