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Comments of chapter undefined of Heavenly Dao Child

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Primal_Chaos_Void
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Thanks for the chapter, I really look forward to seeing it every time a new one is released, but, if I may add, I think that although it is good that you are working your hardest in order to release them quickly, it may affect the quality of the chapter, in this chapter for example, the beginning and ending were good, great even, even if they appeared a bit rushed(which was, to be fair, fitting for the scene), but in the middle when you introduced chen jian it could be seen that he was practically very straightforward(which may have been a part of the character you intended for him to have or it just got off as such) but there was this part in which he said: “and now I will cripple you”, and it really didn’t seem to fit with the paragraph he said right before that, I don’t know if it’s because of problems in your english, it’s fine we(your fanbase in my opinon at least) understand that such problems may occur and it’s okay it happens to everyone, or it might have happend because you rushed the chapter or didn’t notice and a billion other problems, but its fine because in the end you do an amazing job blancing between more then one book and still releasing chapter after chapter with good speed and high quality, but if you feel like you can’t do it anymore or that the quality has lowered, you can stop and take a break for some time for yourself, just be healthy and feel okay, or if you aren’t sure about a certain chapter or paragraph or even a sentence, you can contact me on this comment and I’ll try to help as much as I can. To conclude, I really love this book and I hope that you continue being a great author who does great works👍🏻😁.

SagelyDaoist
SagelyDaoistAuthorSagelyDaoist

Thanks for pointing out my mistakes and being so understanding. The last few months have been hectic, the college semester has been shortened from normal near about 6 months to only a little over 3 months, but the syllabus is the same as such workload including the assignments and tests are keeping most of my time occupied, with little to no time to even think or write properly.