Comments of chapter undefined of Heavenly Dao Child

I like the story very much. However, grammar and spellings needs a lot of improvement, also I get confused lots of times in the use of pronouns. Well, this is better than some I had to discontinue reading because my mind gets tired automatically correcting and filling in between with a word missed. Rest assured, dear author, I shall continue reading. I hope, however, that the chapter pages don't get shorter and shorter. Thanks for a good story. :)