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Comments of chapter undefined of Heavenly Dao Child

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Predqtor21
Predqtor21Lv3Predqtor21

The story is great but the pace is so fast that logic cannot keep up with me

Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv14Chaoticmike

Wow worst first few mins of a babies life... to be hated by your own mother and father over one thing, hope the clan burns and becomes nothing.

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Sorenmageofmareth
SorenmageofmarethLv14Sorenmageofmareth

Fool why would a sinner be born to an empire in not into hell? His lack of a spiritual root is likely because his body is the root.

EternalAldan
EternalAldanLv5EternalAldan

I wont say anything with the story since its chapter, but WHAT IS IT WITH CERTAIN WORD HAVING ALL CAPS and weirdly placed wording?

TheFluffyMan
TheFluffyManLv5TheFluffyMan

Pure baby,and she is shock??!!!!Is our baby from earth is impure??!!!!!!LOL~~~~ 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Li_Xiao_Xiao
Li_Xiao_XiaoLv5Li_Xiao_Xiao

Big OOOF

akserhy
akserhyLv14akserhy

The story is great but author you need an editor. Sometime the sentences are not fluid and there are grammatical mistakes.

AbsolvedJudas
AbsolvedJudasLv4AbsolvedJudas

Already I can tell this isn’t worth it

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Sorenmageofmareth
SorenmageofmarethLv14Sorenmageofmareth

Fool why would a sinner be born to an empire in not into hell? His lack of a spiritual root is likely because his body is the root.

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

Thx for the chap

Grum
GrumLv15Grum

Thx for the chapter!

Killulita
KillulitaLv4Killulita

Thanks for the chapter

Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv13Muthoni_Murira

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Muthoni_Murira
Muthoni_MuriraLv13Muthoni_Murira

I really liked this chapter, good job author.

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

DaoistLimitless
DaoistLimitlessLv6DaoistLimitless

Thanks for the chapter :D🐜🐜🐜🐜🐜