Comments of chapter undefined of Soul Karmas (BL)
Soul Karmas (BL)
LoveableChubby
Chapter comments432
Ceil huh? Sure you didn’t mean to write Ciel instead? ;3 I can totally see his BB origins after seeing that name. Fun chapter! XD
I will give a honest review of this chapter because I can't say story yet; I just started after all. So this is nice. It is not beautifully written or anything and could use some major editing. There was also a lot of repetition, and grammatical mistakes. But. I like it. I like the fact that you are writing something you would approve of and I especially like that this is of the BL genre. At some point, I hope that you will come back to the beginning and give this some good editing, or have someone help you do it instead if you are afraid that you'd change things and end up changing the story. So I give this story a thumbs up. I will continue reading and hope I enjoy it as much as I already think I will. Good job~ (∩_∩)
This story seems nice. I’m still confused tho. I thought Rei betrayed him or something, but that doesn’t seem to be the case? So, he left because he was about to die from the poison? Why did he have to drink the poison? Is Rei the ML? Snow seems to be in love with him and Rei seems to love him too (tho he doesn’t know). Or maybe Rei, Flake (the system from the summary) and ML are the same? Since summary said Flake was born for Snow... I have soo many questions. Can’t wait to find answers😄
