KillerHemboy
there is a thief and ur mission is to just scare them away and he loaned to the system something that he can do with out to much effort he just need to shout or make load commotion to get the some people to scare the theif away wat logic is this if it planing to establish a kingdom with so little brain?
Cliche MC: Talks about justice and has suffered “losses” which are valuable items to him rather than family. OP AF. Keeps provoking ppl he shouldnt even tho he knows its dangerous because hes childish and brattish. (Stronges System, that guy who keeps saying ‘ Yours Truly’$ INNOVATIVE AND REALISTIC MC: Change after a betrayal type (dungeon seeker) Loyal to a cause or a person type ( light yagami is loyal to his ideals) Lacking emotional care from family/ oppressed/ without family/ childhood trauma and acts as good as he can while not foretting to protect himself and act for benefits (this mc) Cold calculative type that changes after race change (overlord) THESE MCS ARE GOOD
"he had punched in a very awkward fashion by bending his body forward. He now lost his balance and hit a table with his hand while falling forward. " He fell from trying to punch someone, seriously? You don't need to know how punch properly to keep your balance. "Daneel hurriedly got up only to realize with horror that the other thief had noticed him and was now lunging towards him with a shining dagger in his hand." The story should end here, he made an absolutely retarded mistake and should be punished for it.
pfft! when it comes to their children's well-being, u can never hide anything from ur parents (especially moms, unless they voluntarily let u off) Love how mc just wants to be w/ & help his family & not some hormonal teenager that latches onto world domination/killing or beating up all oppositions. Now that I think about it, if mc becomes king, his parents will b a great help for him & his kingdom. Did I mention I'm really proud of what mc's dad did & how the family is doing their best for one another xD Now that's family :)