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Comments of chapter undefined of World Domination System

zein_zonker
zein_zonkerLv11zein_zonker

there is a thief and ur mission is to just scare them away and he loaned to the system something that he can do with out to much effort he just need to shout or make load commotion to get the some people to scare the theif away wat logic is this if it planing to establish a kingdom with so little brain?

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PommyJosh
PommyJoshLv11PommyJosh

I actually like this MC, he doesn’t seem to be hell bent on killing everything in sight and acts like a logically normal person. Instead of instantly latching onto becoming king he just wants normal things :) Thx for the chapter.

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Trek
TrekLv6Trek

Yes break free and slaughter your enemies, torture those who wronged you! Kill the families of those who forced you into a living hell for all these years! Muahahahhaha Thanks for the chapter~

Karyehs
KaryehsLv4Karyehs

Can you imagine how creepy it would be to have a stranger from another world take over your childs body and memories and then pretend to be your real child? Living under your roof, hugging you, crying in your arms, etc...? That's the stuff you see in horror movies.

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King_Of_The_Abyss
King_Of_The_AbyssLv4King_Of_The_Abyss

Cliche MC: Talks about justice and has suffered “losses” which are valuable items to him rather than family. OP AF. Keeps provoking ppl he shouldnt even tho he knows its dangerous because hes childish and brattish. (Stronges System, that guy who keeps saying ‘ Yours Truly’$ INNOVATIVE AND REALISTIC MC: Change after a betrayal type (dungeon seeker) Loyal to a cause or a person type ( light yagami is loyal to his ideals) Lacking emotional care from family/ oppressed/ without family/ childhood trauma and acts as good as he can while not foretting to protect himself and act for benefits (this mc) Cold calculative type that changes after race change (overlord) THESE MCS ARE GOOD

lIl
lIlLv5lIl

"he had punched in a very awkward fashion by bending his body forward. He now lost his balance and hit a table with his hand while falling forward. " He fell from trying to punch someone, seriously? You don't need to know how punch properly to keep your balance. "Daneel hurriedly got up only to realize with horror that the other thief had noticed him and was now lunging towards him with a shining dagger in his hand." The story should end here, he made an absolutely retarded mistake and should be punished for it.

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mithun
mithunLv12mithun

Is this a kingdom building system or system that make mc op

Dovah
DovahLv7Dovah

pfft! when it comes to their children's well-being, u can never hide anything from ur parents (especially moms, unless they voluntarily let u off) Love how mc just wants to be w/ & help his family & not some hormonal teenager that latches onto world domination/killing or beating up all oppositions. Now that I think about it, if mc becomes king, his parents will b a great help for him & his kingdom. Did I mention I'm really proud of what mc's dad did & how the family is doing their best for one another xD Now that's family :)

Jack_N_Mikhail
Jack_N_MikhailLv15Jack_N_Mikhail

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TheRedHand
TheRedHandLv11TheRedHand

This is good so far. I really like it!

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Bringer_Of_Peace
Bringer_Of_PeaceLv6Bringer_Of_Peace

Great start, looking forward to more chapters. Hope to see more chapters and fast release. Thanks. Good luck

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Ni_mu
Ni_muLv10Ni_mu

Thanks for the chapter.

Irvinz
IrvinzLv6Irvinz

Thanks for the chapter

Cordero_Garson
Cordero_GarsonLv3Cordero_Garson

like how the author made the character that doesn't know how to throw a punch. lol oh crud moment

Thymetro
ThymetroLv13Thymetro

Good chapter

It_Is_Me_Ttt
It_Is_Me_TttLv4It_Is_Me_Ttt

I'll probably have to read this book and ensure without commenting or it gonna be really annoying.

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EEEEEKLv1EEEEEK

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