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Comments of chapter undefined of World Domination System

ShrikantDj
ShrikantDjLv2ShrikantDj

Starting of the Chapter Is Very Cool. Just Like True Mystery To Find Out Why And How He Transferred To Another World Not Like Some Accident In Other Light-Novels, Comics, Manga, Manhoua etc. Like Accident With Truck, Going To Suicide, etc.. It's Actual And Real Of How Someone Should Transferred to Another World As Per My Opinion.

Inkybear
InkybearLv12Inkybear

Cmon guys be patient. Author is still trying to "paint" the image of his world to us. (Although i wish the chapters were longer ~)

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Trek
TrekLv6Trek

Such a short chapter.... basically nothing happened in this chapter, mc didn't even run a small distance to finish his quest which wouldn't have taken a few minutes. The word count being high does not make it a long chapter if pretty much nothing happens in the story. Thanks for the chapter~

q00u
q00uLv6q00u

Overall this is a much better start than a lot of these that I've seen. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

CaptainBoyHole
CaptainBoyHoleLv13CaptainBoyHole

Lol why the hell does this city have so many fountains.

TheDaoOfTitties
TheDaoOfTittiesLv11TheDaoOfTitties

This MC is foolish with his credit cards, I see.

Oto
OtoLv14Oto

Can the MC get anymore stupid? You don't need a HUD to tell you where north is since the system is already telling you the distance. If you were 500 meters away and then walk one step and the system updates to 501 meters, you're going the wrong direction! MC (and maybe author) without common sense.

fkb
fkbLv5fkb

Need more chapters this is amazing.

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RobynHood
RobynHoodLv5RobynHood

I understand that you wish to build up the world as you go, so the chapter may feel short. However, you must understand that most people have short attention spans. A warning may be helpful.

Kirito_Aoi1
Kirito_Aoi1Lv4Kirito_Aoi1

The guard is an ASS.

AceOfDao
AceOfDaoLv15AceOfDao

arggh he could have found north by walking a 1 meter in one direction and asking the system how far from the fountain and if it was closer then that's north 🤨

_mortem22
_mortem22Lv6_mortem22

600+ meters. Isn't that a bit too far?

TanyaSilver
TanyaSilverLv15TanyaSilver

Waw. A system that lent loans out and can even communicate. What does repaying the loan at it's earliest even mean? Could be days,weeks,months or years.Is there is a need to give that much plot-armor to a mc?

Cadh20000
Cadh20000Lv15Cadh20000

I'll be honest, I was hoping he'd stay in his original world and gain the system so he could "deal" with that politician's son who had made his recent life a living hell.

Djabilong
DjabilongLv6Djabilong

These people, I swear... "So little! Snail's pace! Nothing happens! Wordcount whore!". So we are going to ignore that this is literally 2nd chapter? Makes me wonder if they read anything in their lives that wasn't OMGGUNSHOTSEXPLOSIONSEXTREMEDOLPHINSTOTHEMAX!!1!. Lay off the coffeine, will you?

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mayhene
mayheneLv5mayhene

Need more chapter very short....Interesting story

ChonkyDragon
ChonkyDragonLv4ChonkyDragon

Drink water to recover health, almost reminded me of Prince of Persia ,,😁

Irvinz
IrvinzLv6Irvinz

Thanks for the chapter

Sinfish
SinfishLv6Sinfish

I always frown at these stories that have no "predominant race or color". That might be reasonable for a frontier town in a sci-fi story, but you can already tell by the trappings of this world that transportation is not cheap. Skin color isn't an accident, no more than a polar bear being white is an accident, it works on evolutionary principles to fit an environment. Even in our modern day where the average person can travel across the world with some moderate effort, dominant skin color exists everywhere.

my3blkant
my3blkantLv4my3blkant

wow! you're half-dead, but still have time to notice money-clothing correlation