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Comments of chapter undefined of Divine Beast Ascension

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Mandalynn89
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Thank you for coming back! We missed you.

Leeland_Shababy
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A continuation of my previous comment. How Jack is written makes it super hard to read the story again because you realize how much he lets himself be walked over and treated. Like legitimately I'm having a hard time reading it again since I know Jack will never change and continue to let himself be walked all over by others. Like no backbone or spine even when he is stronger than almost everyone else.

Leeland_Shababy
Leeland_ShababyLv15Leeland_Shababy

So was re reading Achievement Junkie and I gotta say Jack has little character growth in the way of becoming partners with Duran or whatever his name is. Like reading it again I gotta say Jack is pushed around and never gotten a say of his opinion. That's obvious in the very beginning. So I gotta ask what benefit did the neutral god gain besides cleaning up the planet which he could have easily done without Jack. As much as I like Jack I think you could have made him less of a push over as he is. Like is literally forced into how many marriages??? Has no say over it especially when he still is in mourning for the first person he fell in love with. Like that right there should have been a good place for character development and have him stand up for himself. But nope you make him a push over and someone who goes along with others wishes. That's a servant or follower not a partner. Very clear difference. Very upsetting that you tried writing Jack as the guy's partner but in reality you wrote Jack as a servant.