Shen Tianyi
First, baiqi is old, he more into strategist than fighter, yes he can fight but is old why bodyguard??.... Second, the trial to get legacy is nonsense... The mc is cold and bitter but that didnt make him imune to power and wealth(especially when he is having a grudge to settle) and women unless he is impotent... Three, the world is like a game, lv and everything... Question... Other race, is they are from other world or A.I/ cpu?? Villagers, where does mc summon them from? Dead historical people?? Why when summoned they is like mindless doll suddenly loyal as **** to mc??? Are they npc??? Then how many npc is there exist? If half or even quarter of player is lord, how many villager npc will be spawned, npc is more important than other human since they are mindlessly loyal when born.... Legacy stone can be sold??? Arent the owner must pass trial? Example, mc sold it to non qin bloodline, will baiqi still acknowledge him like he do to mc even though the mc is just a snobbish brat trying to be emo and ****, how he won baiqi respect is out of my logical comprehension.... Answer, they are npc programmed to be loyal, else what?? They are "revived" in game and forced to be someone servant? Wow no wonder they are so earnest to serve no dignity.. Wait.. No free will, cant act outside of limitations... Yep npc... wew.... So many weird thingy Fourth, the heaven awaken world, ok it is alien thingy, so souls, billions of them can enter and out safely no side effect, this no prob.. But suddenly, only few hours, all the important power is trying their damdest to get well in it, all resource is put on them why?? Something inform them of something?? If not why so desperate?? The goal in this fantasy like setting is? Is the human gonna fight alien from other world for survival or benefit? Why they keep infighting if so?? Arent the power know something that is why they put many resource no??? Many inconsistencies
Ffs I'll never realise if u guys are reading the same novel that I'm. In the first few chapters the MC experience the whole rise and fall of the Great Qin state (it even suggest that he could feel it's feelings). Did u read that part? Of course he his a litle apatic. Did u realise the part that he his alone in his home?! That he had 3 jobs affer classes?! What does this means? Ask yourself first before questioning the autor, jesus... It suggest that he has been to a difficult time and that he his at least living alone or that he has no family, did u read the part that the "game" world is gonna devour the "real" world?! Of course he does not care for what happens in the real world, at least for now. Did u realise that he has a fking legendary village that is suppose to be supper rare that even familys in the real world offer millions and millions for it? Did u realise that maybe having that knowlege of the "game" world is a fking advantage of that? Or no? The world building I really can't defend the author because for now it's really slow when compared with the fast pace of the novel, so I'm hoping it will be well development later on in the next few chapters Pls ffs before u start saying BSing about the author and novel, think why the author wrote in that way and why. For now the novel is like a 7/10, because it misses the answers of a lot of questions I have and the lack of world develmont. Hope it gets better with time, good luck!