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Comments of chapter undefined of A Wizard's Secret

I_Seek_Fulfillment
I_Seek_FulfillmentLv1I_Seek_Fulfillment

This storytelling is so forced its ridiculous.

Mutt
MuttLv5Mutt

so We get no whiff of this quantum computer and then suddenly the MC is like "Oh if only if I have this ex machina" and then the ex machina appears. Instead of just following him over

ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6ThrustThunder

"Construct a Spell Model and imprint the Spell Model into one's mind using Mind Power. This was the same as simulating a Spell Model in the mind using Mind Power." People Die if they are Killed... Soooo much redundancy in this chapter just to push back what we came here for: "Will you like to initiate the Matrix?" About time! I wonder why this magical device followed our MC when he was just hit by an everyday car, not blown up in a Hadron Collider or electrocuted by his PC...

Bogart
BogartLv13Bogart

Let me guess, after this he is going to make the uninspired choice of beginning with the fireball spell, but because of the "Matrix" it will be loads better than his teacher's... Pretty stock if you ask me. Author would have been much better to reference this technology in the beginning. A sudden info dump with no prior warning or idea that such a thing existed, throws you waaaay off.

Kniveph
KnivephLv5Kniveph

Is it just me or the line "Will you like to initiate the Matrix..." just sounds awkward or incorrect?

Stardust_Nya_Nya
Stardust_Nya_NyaLv14Stardust_Nya_Nya

Oh no, math is so hard... If only I had a calculator, IN MY MIND, IT WOULD BE SO MUCH EASIER!~ "Ahm, I am calculator-kun!~" OH SHITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!~

LongSongGolden
LongSongGoldenLv14LongSongGolden

WOW that was lazy AF. I didn't think this novel could get any worse but it just went ahead and did. It's like it was written by a machine that is just regurgitating a mashup of every other popular magic novel without any effort.

Clara_the_fish
Clara_the_fishLv10Clara_the_fish

Sigh. Goodbye.

faimherb
faimherbLv7faimherb

A quantum calculator, The Matrix. Truck-kun-sama in his previous life must've been a warehouse delivery truck for these supercomputer Matrix chips

Login_Achieved
Login_AchievedLv4Login_Achieved

This chapter feels like the author just remembered that the MC is a world traveler.

SlaserX
SlaserXLv10SlaserX

Don't do it! The Agents will come after you! Seriously though, 20 chapters? How stupid is this guy? He's no Leylin for sure.

Wytchlord
WytchlordLv14Wytchlord

This is probably one of the worst ways to introduce a chip or "matrix" to your story. Seriously, he could have thought about it in the nobles class already without thinking of its name specifically so its existence could have already been introduced.

smithnj
smithnjLv11smithnj

Ugh, I was liking the building of the character without the AI. I still want the materix to exist in the story and to see how they will change, but couldn't it have some reason other than literal wish fulfillment?

JORM
JORMLv6JORM

IT’S HERE EVERYONE LOOK THE MYTHICAL QUANTUM BEAST IS HERE!!!!!!!

_Zzzz
_ZzzzLv4_Zzzz

Holy **** this is the biggest ass pull ever

bookwyrm40
bookwyrm40Lv1bookwyrm40

Hey life would be much easier if a ridiculous amount of money appeared before me! *ding* Hey I just looked through my couch cushions and found a ridiculous amount of money! yeah! Three cheers for lazy writing!

Skaalvara
SkaalvaraLv13Skaalvara

So much filler, and the Matrix just magically appears when the MC is thinking of it. Boring...

elwgantkiwi
elwgantkiwiLv11elwgantkiwi

Freaking ***** only. Coming to story after 20 chapies

KidBeneathDarkness
KidBeneathDarknessLv10KidBeneathDarkness

Honestly tho the author should stop being redundant Like damn I got to skip many sentences Coz it's runnin in circles It got pretty boring

EternalRest
EternalRestLv14EternalRest

🤔so let me get this straight he just thought about this Matrix after all this time!

Mute
MuteLv13Mute

""Will you like to initiate The Matrix?"" Should be Would you like to initiate The Matrix.