LazySky
So author read some of the comments I think that with his character he should of brought the alarm, but again ppl forget he's a 7yr old from the country. He makes light of it himself so good job with the lack of combat experience and reaction to killing. Ppl seem to forget unless for special reasons 7yr olds aren't use to killing other humans. Overall good job. Agreed this 7 yr old is super mature and def sound/felt older in the beginning, but fits better now. As I can see you've kept going good job don't be discouraged
Nirerin:I would agree with this if it doesn't feel like everyone who meets him treats him like an *****...
Imma say it, why is a crown prince walking randomly on the streets, why does the mc always happens to be exactly where some royal family is? and why does he always have to be absent minded :(, I'm gonna try to be as constructive as i can be(not much), but please stop using weird plot devices, Actually,40 chapters is enough and I think it's about time the MC grew from his 7yo age. Time skips at such young age never hurts the story, It actually improves it a notch or two.
Why would he have an emergency talisman and not keep it on him? Especially when they've been feeling danger looming over them these last couple days.. That makes zero sense.. In addition, does he really believe sending one of the strongest fighters away to call for help is smart? Minutes can be a long time in a fight
Greyson is sick and tired of being bothered but he is stupid enough to bump the Crown Prince and this is not the first. He bumped Claude too. The talisman is not with him knowing fully well that they would go out in the city? What is more dangerous, being inside the in or outside? So stupid of him. Also, if he is trully a genius, he would know that killing is better than being killed!
And this is why you learn how to properly heal people,how to properly defend yourself, and to always listen to your instincts,if they tell you to run you dont stay because your curious. Also if he learned how to cook for himself I am sure he could optimize his own meals to make them better suited for himself and thus increase his cultivation progress. At the end of the day they are both kids so I will give them a pass but Gray really needs to start being practical with how he spends his time.
glad to know that the mc is not your typical OP character. he has weaknesses which is good as it makes me more anticipate how he would grow. liking it so far p.s. might be too early too say but i hope it wouldn’t suddenly be romance-centric when he grows up xd as for grey being loved or loving others, I prefer it to revolve more about family and friends. actually, focusing on adventure and action is what I hope for
liking how real the characters are.. whilst disappointed at first, I then realize that it’s a really normal reaction from greyson. i could understand why in regards to his age and background. it’s different for aria since she seemed to be from a family of strong creatures. and she was brought up differently